Friday, 5 February 2010

Improving our Instructions

We have been writing instructions to make Tudor style soup and Tudor style bread, as part of our topic called Hang onto your Head! On this flip film a girl in Year 5 improves her instructions so that they include time connectives, use of a comma, adjectives which make her instructions much easier to follow.

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