Friday, 4 May 2012

Water sparkles like crystal: Another poem from year 5!



Water sparkles like crystal.

Water sparkles like crystal,
My special blue quilt covers the shore,
Tickles my toes,
I want more.
Mirror-like and soothing,
Reflecting the sapphire sky.
The diamonds of the sea,
Tranquil and calm.
Water sparkles like crystal.

Promising poet (alliteration!) and simile fan: Molly R



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